Bit hard and bleeding


August 30th, 2008

Two Rage/JT drabbles @ 03:13 am

These drabbles were written for [info]severina2001. Thanks to [info]firehead30 for her beta of Respite (it happened so long ago, she may not even remember!).






Respite


They crush the enemy completely. Decimate them. It’ll be morning before more land, and Rage decides it’s safe to leave the city until then. They need to sleep.

The island’s warm and fragrant when they arrive, but they’re too tired for anything but tending wounds and slumber.

Later, JT wakes to velvet night and Rage inside him; hovering inches above the silvered sea. He smiles and lets his head fall back, hair trailing a dark and starry wake.

Constellations wheel and the earth spins toward tomorrow, but for now there’s only worship and sacred pleasure, only communion and green cathedrals.








Diversion


It’s JT’s idea to fuck inside the hurricane.

They drop into its eye, streak past whirling, grey-green clouds and splash down in an ocean, calm and blue.

The love-making is astonishing, and afterwards Rage floats docilely, allowing JT to strip him of his suit. It’s rare to see Rage naked in bright sunlight, and JT straddles him, lust quickening again.

“This tops Mars,” JT baits casually, anticipating Rage’s sure response (the Mars fuck had been Rage’s idea, after all). He’s rewarded by a single, rough tug. Salt stings his sex-bruised lips, and JT presses closer and closer to his punishment.

 
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From:[info]firehead30
Date: August 30th, 2008 03:03 pm (UTC)
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Of course I remember Respite, and it is very beautiful and lush.

Diversion is hot and perfect. Specifically JT knowing exactly how to get what he wants from Rage.“This tops Mars,” JT baits casually, anticipating Rage’s sure response (the Mars fuck had been Rage’s idea, after all). He’s rewarded by a single, rough tug. Salt stings his sex-bruised lips, and JT presses closer and closer to his punishment. Perfectly done.
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From:[info]flashfly
Date: September 1st, 2008 07:00 pm (UTC)
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Thank you, Fire, for liking them and for helping me with Respite. ♥ These drabbles were some of the toughest I've ever worked on. Maybe I need super powers?
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From:[info]firehead30
Date: September 1st, 2008 08:23 pm (UTC)
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Pfft, you own the super powers.
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From:[info]flashfly
Date: September 1st, 2008 09:25 pm (UTC)
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Aw. Of all the crazy things, today I thought of writing a drabble about Ripley's cat's funeral.

R.I.P. Jonesy
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From:[info]not_yet_defined
Date: August 30th, 2008 07:32 pm (UTC)
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i really enjoyed both of these a lot. the tone of them was very dark comic-esque.

i think i would off vast sums of money, if i had them, for someone to have acutally produced volumes of RAGE.
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From:[info]flashfly
Date: September 1st, 2008 09:29 pm (UTC)
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Thank you, NY. Writing them as super-heroes is very liberating because they can essentially do anything. You should try it!

I agree 100% with you, I would have loved to see actual comics produced. I was in a bookstore in NY once, and they were selling the Rage poster, and the shopkeeper said, 'hurry if you want to buy it, it's going to sell out.' I didn't buy it because it was just Rage. No JT.
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From:[info]besamislabios
Date: August 31st, 2008 04:28 pm (UTC)
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Hola, tanto tiempo. ;)

Excellent, both of them.

Salt stings his sex-bruised lips, and JT presses closer and closer to his punishment.

I loved that line.
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From:[info]flashfly
Date: September 1st, 2008 09:34 pm (UTC)
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Es verdad. Ha pasado demasiado tiempo. En estos dias estoy con muy poco tiempo para jugar en la computadora pero me puse brava con mi misma por tener estos drabbles por tantos meses sin acabarlos, y no me pare de la mesa hasta que termine!

Gracias, por leer y por tus commentarios, como siempre, tan bonitos. :)
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From:[info]besamislabios
Date: September 3rd, 2008 09:19 am (UTC)
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Me agrada que los hayas terminado, siempre me gusta leer tus historias. NO me cansaré nunca de repetirlo, adoro la manera tuya de escribir. Me fascina. Todavía no he terminado de leer todo lo tuyo...me gusta saborearlo lentamente.

Espero que estés bien, y que tengas más tiempo en el futuro para venir a jugar y/o escribir. :)

&hearts

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From:[info]dirtylttlescret
Date: August 31st, 2008 06:46 pm (UTC)
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Huh. Guh. *Is speachless*
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From:[info]flashfly
Date: September 1st, 2008 09:35 pm (UTC)
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Do we need to send Rage or JT (your choice) to give you back your speaking powers? ;)

Thank you.
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From:[info]dirtylttlescret
Date: September 2nd, 2008 01:29 am (UTC)
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Wow, I was so incoherent that apparently I couldn't even spell speechless correctly.
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